REBUILD RHETORIC

TO MICHAEL.

Do you think it would be easier for me to get my point across if I used one idea word RHETORIC and one word that is slightly less ambiguous like REBUILD in the place of retrospect so that I could use architectural diagrams along with different and seemingly neutral textural text elements like the alphabet in different typefaces? I think this word change would leave more room for more stable visual messages than the RETROSPECT plan. I think I could come up with alot more solid ideas on the interactions that take place between the letterform and background elements.