So it really looks like these are coming along exciting typography on the layouts x-actly what was the assignment again? you are doing great either way.
There's some truly excellent compositions in the mix, Freshwater is a great moment. And so is Wait.
Comps that need revisiting/revision are Meat, Skin and Menance and Bondage. It may just be slight placement changes but they don't have the same power as the rest. Should Skin be a different word, a more lateral take on that idea, something about sensitivity or texture that will make us think of skin?
So it really looks like these are coming along
ReplyDeleteexciting typography on the layouts
x-actly what was the assignment again?
you are doing great either way.
Hi Cam,
ReplyDeleteThere's some truly excellent compositions in the mix, Freshwater is a great moment. And so is Wait.
Comps that need revisiting/revision are Meat, Skin and Menance and Bondage. It may just be slight placement changes but they don't have the same power as the rest. Should Skin be a different word, a more lateral take on that idea, something about sensitivity or texture that will make us think of skin?
Sweet stuff, Michael