i think this is the same sound file as on the video above -- you put this file into a cut of your video, right?just in case, good voice-over, but too long. some sfx are nice, but others seem gratuitous or unrelated to your subject matter -- just there "because". the layering of the voice-over is interesting, but why do it? what does it add to the work?i would try getting some literal sfx from the printing process and see what you can do with them. maybe you think they'll be too literal, but you never know. also you have a tendency toward heavy manipulation, so that may be good for literal sounds to be heavily manipulated, so they're not so obvious.
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