very poetic interpretation of the communication process. keep going - it's lush and engaging!
so far the chapter on "noise" and "channel" are the most clear to me.
where it is lacking is knowing what this is about. try addressing:
1. in the initial set up telling the viewer what is coming. if you think of this as a mini-film, then a title would help frame it.
2. and/or small ways to bring a layer of clarity (reference names of the model like "noise" "source" "message" etc) into the piece itself. it does not need to be visually loud or dominating.
very poetic interpretation of the communication process. keep going - it's lush and engaging!
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where it is lacking is knowing what this is about. try addressing:
1. in the initial set up telling the viewer what is coming. if you think of this as a mini-film, then a title would help frame it.
2. and/or small ways to bring a layer of clarity (reference names of the model like "noise" "source" "message" etc) into the piece itself. it does not need to be visually loud or dominating.
Word. Just like we discussed. I am really happy about the possibility of a dashboard element. It's appropriate for the times.
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